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Emaciation/Camp Facts

They (who?)  sent able bodied men in one direction and able bodied women in another and elderly and children sent to another

Everyone who had a profession in real life that could help out was used. If u could not produce you were put to the gas chamber

 The walls were built from stones from a rocky mountain and they had to carry every stone by hand from the mine to the camp

• The doctor decided if you were fit for work you were sent to work camp and if the doctor said you weren’t fit for work you were sent to an extermination camp.

• Working conditions were difficult you had to march 8 miles to work

• Sometimes it rained a little and saved lives but most of them were forced to go inside

• Some prisoners just fell over and died right then and there from all the starvation and dehydration and of no fatigue

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Working Methods

If tried to escape u got a rope tied to your (no person pronouns - fix the rest of your paragraphs to take them out)  hands behind your back lifting u a couple inches of the ground until you passed out, then u were revived and the process repeated several times more. All Nazi torture methods were forced to be watched by the Jews so it sends them a message about what will happen.Children and older people were told to go in a room and take a shower and without warning gas came through the room and killed them.They were striped of everything and if any valuables were found on them they were put to death. Each of them had to build a wall everyday, if they didn’t complete the wall in time they wouldn’t get any food. If u couldn’t walk anymore or passed out, you were shot.

Consequences

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